Spring,

another poem i wrote when i was 17 back in 2009 .....

Spring,

I walk outside, and I see no more snow,

Where has it all gone to,

It melted away,

Oh what a joy,

Must be spring again,

That was fast,

Seems like just yesterday we had tons of snow on the ground,

Time to play in the rain, and put away all the winter coats,

I go and play outside, and run and jump and say yip pie it's spring time again.

THE END,

BY:Jennifer Little

Author's Note

hope you enjoy this poem .,....... well let me know what you think about it .....

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Very lovely, we have to enjoy the simple things in life, like spring and sun! :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Spring is the prettiest season to me :)
Wonderful job on this!

[Sahar moonlight]

thats a refreshing poem :)
it brings joy to me

[Pencrafter]

It's a pleasant comentary on the passing of the seasons. I suggest shortening the last three lines or breaking them up so that the line length is more even. Also, you might try mentioning specific events or scenes of spring, to provide a little color. I like your poem and the positive, happy feel it invokes. Good job.

[Tegon Maus]

I liked this one as well

[Cassie Fraga]

well that was a simple piece with lots of fun packed into it... GREAT JOB!!!

[Thea]

Such a fine piece of work.
:)))

[olla]

youthful exuberance for a young season.. nicely done..

[Ashton Blake]

Its a nice short poem.

[Geraldine]

This is really really good. ^^ keep it up.