If i were ruler of the world,

If i were ruler of the world,

A Poem by jennifer little
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well just explaining if i were ruler of the world.. this is another kids poem ..... hope you like it

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If I were Ruler of the world,



“If I were ruler of the world,”

I'd make some changes fast.

I'd say” The ruler's always first!

“ If I were ruler of the world,”

People would bow down to me.

If you talked about me,

You would get thrown to my pet ale gators.

Their wating for you.

“If I were ruler of the world,”

My little brother would be last.”

“Because the rulers always first!”




The End,



BY:Jennifer Little

© 2012 jennifer little


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jennifer little
well like i said its another kids poem and i hope you enjoy it .... let me know what you think please

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I think if I were ruler of the world I would put the people first because when you earn their respect, you wouldn't need the Alligators.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like the line with the alligators.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow. it's a fun read :))

Posted 8 Years Ago


amusing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


“If I were ruler of the world,”

My little brother would be last.” .............. Ha ha ha! I absolutely died over that!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Quirky.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This was really cute!!! I loved it! Any and everyone could enjoy this poem! But.....I'd like it if you wrote more serious teenager/adult poems. I feel like you'd be really good at it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is funny and enjoyable to read! :) Great job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


So cute charming and simple! Its really nice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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A charming poem, one that would be a delight to read for readers of all ages and not just children. :) I think everyone has had thoughts like these at least once (if not countless times) in their lives, and I am definitely no exception.

Just a few things I noticed: I think you meant to move the quotation mark in line three to right before "the;" in that case, you probably want to add a closing quotation mark to "first," if I'm reading this correctly. Also, I believe you meant to spell ale gators as "alligators" in line seven? The grammatical error in line eight is tricky, but because "their" is actually possessive, you probably want to switch that out for "they're," since "they're" is a contraction of "they are" ("They are waiting for you.")

A charming poem, a delight to read. If you ever have the time, I encourage you to fine tune it with a quick proofread, and keep writing! :)

-Mina

Posted 8 Years Ago



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hi im jen i am a single mother of a 2 year old baby girl I have some books published already heres the link spread the word http://www.lulu.com/spotlight/jenniferlittle673 i have a blog on www.. more..

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