Love poems

This is not  another love poem where I tell you your smile  shines brighter then the sun that if I spin a life time in your arms it wouldn't be long enough that your eyes are like the stars and I could look into them for eternity This is not another love poem where I tell you That if you were a drug I would be addicted to you That my body aches when we are a part too long but this is not another love poem Because I'm tired of love poems

Reviews

[just is]

This is wonderful, very unique

[Michael G.]

Good thoughts. The content carried itself throughout. I found it a little difficult to get through it without punctuation.
keep writing.

[Emily B]

this is beautiful

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:)

. what a lovely and unique love poem ...