Ray of Light

Ray of Light

A Poem by jesserose99
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Poem about the spirit

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Ray of light, breathe my soul, breathe it deeply down below....

Breathe it sweetly, up on high...breathe it out when I die.

Diamond sky in the night

Filling my soul with light

Telling me that I am loved

From beings high above

See your way through the fire

Penetrate my inner liar

Do you know who you are?

Do you quake when life gets hard?

I ask myself do I burn bright?

Can you see my soul at night?

Am I dim...

or do I glow......

deep inside my inner know.

© 2015 jesserose99


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How did i miss this one!!! This is top ranked Jesse, the thought behind this is very very deeply felt....Wonderfully worked up....The questions you have asked in the poem made it much more classy.....

Posted 3 Years Ago


jesserose99

3 Years Ago

so glad you enjoyed it..this was my first poem that got me writing poetry again. I can't believe th.. read more
Inject Positivity

3 Years Ago

Well it deserves to be popular Jesse....Im glad that it inspired you to write poetry again, otherwis.. read more
Beauty of spirit illuminates this gem of a poem - lovely its sounds!


Diamond sky in the night

Filling my soul with light

Posted 3 Years Ago


jesserose99

3 Years Ago

Thank you Solar, I appreciate you and your clever your way with words, I see them as both kind, and .. read more
Solar

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your writing that is both light and filled with Light.
Great poem, really enjoyed that!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


jesserose99

3 Years Ago

Thank you Malcom!
i loved it . simple but heavy meaning i feel that.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Questions for the starlight of our diamond skies... and answers whispered cross the night.

Posted 4 Years Ago


This starts wonderfully and just keeps getting better. I love the ending....deep inside my inner know. To know someone so purely is a prize we can only dream of achieving, yet when it happens, it is effortless, awe inspiring and known without thinking, reciprocated, for you can only hold such beauty when it is freely given.
Glad I decided to play cath up on your previous writes. Perfect.

Posted 4 Years Ago


This poem is simple and beautiful.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Really loved this poem. Amazing work.

Posted 4 Years Ago


I enjoyed the poem. You took the reader to place of question and inner thoughts.
"Am I dim...
or do I glow......
deep inside my inner know"
Some people do glow and some people are burn-out. All of us need to find places of peace and comfort. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Really good work
It was only by chance that I saw your work
But now I shall keep a tab on all your writings.


Posted 4 Years Ago



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Added on November 25, 2015
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jesserose99
jesserose99

lakewood, CO



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I am a tarot reader and numerologist, who loves to write poetry. I also write songs and love to sing and play guitar. I love art too, so clearly I just have a passion for creativity. Also love my dog.. more..

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