done with you

break up and showing the man who is boss

i cry a thousand tears for what???

to watch you break my heart again???

 

well this time it will be different,

when you walk out those doors

i never wanna see your lying

cheating

stupid

controling

nasty a*s ever again!!!

 

ive had enough of heart beak and tears

its my time to show the real me and stand up for what i think is right

 

i am goin to love unconditionally

hang with the people who care about me

and drop to my knees and pray for you

because of what you've done

and ask god to forgive you

and ask him to help you.

Author's Note

ive never had a guy cheat on me and if i have i didnt know about it nor do i really care cause ive got plenty of men lned up to get me.

Reviews

[hmm]

Such a powerful, full of gumption write,
I totally love this write.
awesome!

[RLEVick]

yikes, you feeel like such rage,
and aggression in it.
Emotion is a the main thing you try to convey in poetry,
and you do it very well

[SpokenWord]

Well first I like that dress on the woman in the picture too bad she is walking away enough to break any man's heart. Ahem but this isn't a picture review so let me put on my sun glasses so not to see those legs in the red dress. It takes time to reach that point where enough is enough and one decides to get off the merry go round of repeatingly allowing someone to hurt them in the same way over and over again. I have been on that ride and it is nothing pleasant about it and I have done that to others and it wasn't enjoyable either. Showing mercy at the end of your write. Most want them to burn in hell I guess you have a heart. And ahem you have men lined up, okay playette you go girl!