Changing

What I strive for

Is so far from what I am.

Miles away from who I want to be.

Reviews

[Seshat Nidaba]

Oh I'm surprised, I didn't expect a haiku, I like.

[Priscilla Sayers]

Love that. No mish mosh of words to get to a very solid point. Great work!

[Antonio Valentino]

Oh gosh, change usually doesn't come too easily does it... this sounds feelings inside a blender... mixed emotions

A lot to think about in such a short piece... i love that... my poems are longer then sin and don't make half as much sense... :))

Really enjoyed, thanks for share
Antonio :)

[roy mccarthy]

almost like a haiku!
but it says whats needed too in a poetic way!

[Personne]

That's such an odd thing to write. It just boggles my mind, but in a good way. Why would someone strive for something that will not fit them? Why want something that is not truly who you are? Very nice poem. It's clever.