Children in Puberty

Children in Puberty

A Poem by Jessica



their legs are getting longer

their feet are growing too

they're starting to get pimples

they're  glad that we are too!


The boys are talking 'six packs'

The girls discussing bras

Make-up, fashion, friendships

Boys are mad on cars


Confusing and exciting

the self they feel and see

I guess that they are changing

into an adult them.


© 2010 Jessica

Author's Note

Don't let them see this!!!

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This version..
So cool!
Better than the last one so.

Posted 9 Years Ago

I certainly remember feeling myself at that age... I couldn't keep my hands off...

Posted 9 Years Ago

"I guess that they are changing

into an adult them."

I think you should and selves after, them, because it totally makes no sense, but I really liked the poem though, keep up the good work. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

I see it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Go die!!!!!!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Years Ago

interesting very interseting

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Years Ago

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6 Reviews
Added on September 7, 2010
Last Updated on September 18, 2010
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Jessica's the name. I am a fifteen year old young lady who originated from Hong Kong and studies abroad in the UK at the moment. I have a passion towards writing, but it seemed to be buried with the.. more..

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