Dania & Cyniel

Dania & Cyniel

A Poem by Jessica

Dania & Cyniel

they are in love

sitting on a gum tree

kissing and hugging

how romanric, how finasticating

I believe their love will never end

You can't count how many love letters they've sent

their love has never been rented

they didn't share their love

just keeping it to theirselves

shelfish about this tingy

They didn't obey their father

when they are kissing and hugging and doing romantic things

so consentrating

while in love

together eating a vanilla flavoured puff

Watching the moon at the same time

Dania and Cyniel

really in love

sitting on the tree house

with a dove

© 2010 Jessica

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Author's Note

dania, sorry

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Dania and Cyniel

Cynthia and Daniel right? XD

Nice. I like the story of it, but I'm sure you could have written this better. Like... it just doesnt flow very well. No matter, i still like it. hehe

Posted 9 Years Ago

I love the imagry this painted. Next you should make a poem that is deep and comes from the heart.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Cyniel?? aREN'T YOU CRAZY ?

Posted 9 Years Ago

What a lovely picture you painted for us! Your poem's going into my fav' collection. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on October 1, 2010
Last Updated on October 1, 2010



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Jessica's the name. I am a fifteen year old young lady who originated from Hong Kong and studies abroad in the UK at the moment. I have a passion towards writing, but it seemed to be buried with the.. more..

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