Evil

For evil to be handsome is a given
It's what makes the soul falter to give in
For if evil was hairy
Dirty and scary
There'd be no reason to love him

And I know that my demon's advancing
For his power grows more, time advancing
"Oh, this girl is all mine
All her time is my time"
He purred to me, smile still dancing

His eyes literally light up the night
Drawing me nearer his sight
And when our hot bodies touch
All my blood starts to rush
Then he moves in for the bite

And it's bliss to be under his spell
My handsome demon from hell
He indulges, commands
With the touch of his hands
And he knows that I'll never tell

Reviews

[Jay. E. V.]

I love this poem. Amazing. I will say that,strictly my opinion, your first and last stanzas are the strongest. I feel that you lose the most of your power in the second stanza. Rework this if you feel you need to and it will sound better.
again. Only my opinin. 100/100

[Jessica Jean]

I do agree with you, but I'll keep it like this for now. Thanks!

[junaid altaf]

evil exists to reflect the beauty of good...............

[Jessica Jean]

I like that !

[junaid altaf]

thank you

[zainul]

Wonderful write
Enjoyed reading

[Faria C]

Wow, this is amazing poetry! I especially love the first and last stanzas. You have real talent, keep it up C=

[Jessica Jean]

Thanks :)

[Faria C]

No prob ^-^

[Nick.B]

Beautifully written, love the last stanza...sometimes evil can be that sweet...great job...you have some really interesting work in here

[Jessica Jean]

I agree. That means a lot, thank you!