Save Me

I wrote this at the beginning of this month. I was in my room, reading my bible and I think it was Psalms 118. I really like it though and I hope you do too!

“Save Me”

 

 

I’m here in my room

Counting the times

He hasn’t come through

I gave everything

I gave all of me

And what I got

Was just a broken heart

No one to turn to

No one to care

I’m calling out

But no one’s there

 

I’m crying out to You

I’m screaming out for You

Come save me from this world

Come save me from this life  (2x)

 

I’m here in my room

Another night

This time it’s new

They screamed at me

Told me to leave

And here I am

Packing my things

No one to turn to

No one to care

I’m calling out

But no one’s there

 

Chorus

 

I’m pouring out my life

My spirit’s weak inside

I’m falling faster still

Drowning against my will

Sinking deeper now

Fighting to get out

 

I’m crying out to You

I’m screaming out for You

Come save me from this world

Come save me from this life

 

I’m calling out

I’m crying out

I’m reaching out for You

Can You hear me?

Do You believe me?

Come and find me

Save me from this life (2x)

 

Won’t You save me

Save me

Save me from this life

 

 

 

Reviews

[AaronPhobia]

this is a good song and it would make a good alternative genre song

[Helen Woodward]

The repetitiveness of this is due to the fact that they are lyrics as opposed to poetry and people need to know that Juli (put an authors note in) As with every lyric I read I want to hear the music because on their own there is an emptiness. I hope this is fictional?? The message is certainly there with force and deliberation...keep writing, the more you write and read other's work the more your own work will benefit.
Cheers,
Helen :-)

[Michael Carr]

a nice piece, wouldn't say its the most original thing I've ever read as it reads like any other punk/alternative tune, however, that aside it would make a very good tune. the rhythm is steady and smooth, you get some decent imagery, and some powerful moments as well.
good job!

[Succubi]

nice...this would make a good alternative song...it mightalso work with hard rock 2 =)