Don't Waste Your Words, You're Talking To A Brick Wall

Don't Waste Your Words, You're Talking To A Brick Wall

A Poem by jumbie's #1 fan
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if you have a problem with who i am or the way i live my life, you can suck it.

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Don’t Waste Your Words, You’re Talking To A Brick Wall

Save your breath
Save your words
Because I'm sick
So sick of you
Of your words, your advice
Your preference on how I should live my life
Don’t scream at me
Do not yell
Do not ever tell me I'm on my way to hell
Because the truth is,
I'm DONE.

I want to do good
I want to do better
But if I listen to you
I’ll just be signing another suicide letter

I know I screwed up
I know I’ve done wrong
So stop playing it over like a repeating song

You just don’t get it
You don’t know what I’ve been through
But this is something I can’t let you do

You’re not going to break my spirit
You’re not going to steal my strength
You’re not going to draw out every little thing I’ve done
To any amount of length

I'm not going to take it
I'm not going to lose it
But the way you're trying fix
What’s not broken
Is not the way I see fit

So here is a subtle warning to you
All gentle and soft

Kindly leave me alone
And back the

 


HELL OFF!
 

© 2009 jumbie's #1 fan


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Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOH! *gasps, clears throat*

I totally agree with you on this one! I couldn't of said it better myself, really. My mom and i got into an argument yesterday. I had let my dog out into the backyard b4 she came in from work. When she came to the door, she wanted to let the dog out again, and i told her 'no,' cause i let him out already, and that i had cleaned his paws and stuff. She still insisted on letting him out again cause she 'thought' he had to go again, which he didnt lol. I told her 'no' again, and she like blew up on me, and told me to shut the f**k up. And then i told her to shut the f**k up lol. Then she threatened to throw me out of the house after that lol. Ugh, but u have no idea what she's like, man >:( Ugh, the devil from another planet, bigtime! And she doesnt know me like i know myself. And im just too afraid to even talk to her about my problems, cause of the fear that she always would reject me and tell me im crazy and stuff. So...f**k that crap haha. And some of my writing is based on my parents, and on how they put me down and stuff, and think that im worthless and stuff; so, yea. It just would be so nice to feel loved and understood for once by a really nice, kind and understanding individual who cares, and agrees with u, ya kno? Anyways...sorry bout my life story here lol. But, yea, i really love this poem, cause it's something that i can definitely relate to. *Hugs* :) I hope everything will be alright hun. Excellent piece!

B.A.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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