Maybe Pain Just Isn't Enough

Maybe Pain Just Isn't Enough

A Poem by jumbie's #1 fan
"

pain is strange. we have a big endurance for it

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Pain is a peculiar thing

It pushes us to our limits

But never pushes us over

Some say they can’t handle it

Some say it hurts too bad

But it doesn’t

Trust me, it doesn’t

So go ahead

Claw my skin

Break my fingers

Make me bleed

Make me scream

Split my lip

Beat me

Bruise me

Break me

Hurt me

Because maybe

Maybe I don’t care

Maybe I’m numb

Maybe I’m used to it

Because maybe anything that they can possibly do to me

Will never compare with what you did to me.

© 2010 jumbie's #1 fan


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Your so talented, I have no idea how you get emotions, thoughts and feelings on to paper and have it come out so vivid and perfect like this. I think my favorite line was the last one, it was like a dagger, and a beautiful one too.

Posted 10 Years Ago


thats similar to me i think u and i have something in common besides that i like the write

Posted 10 Years Ago


WOH!? That's pretty scary stuff, man :( I hope this isnt for real. Good poem tho. Very gripping with every emotion.

M.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on July 17, 2010
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