I Love You My Dear

I haven't written a sad piece lately, and I kinda oddly felt happy while writing this one. So hopefully people enjoy it.

You look beyond me,

Breaking away from the feelings,

Trying to wrap yourself up,

In the face of the unknown...

Time passes,

So swiftly,

One sweet moment,

Gone so fast

I want to say one last thing...

All I want to do is stay here,

Wrapped in you forever,

But I know the time grows near,

The time that you will go away forever

When I whisper those five words,

Will you still hear me say,

I love you my dear

The wasteland separates us,

As invisible hands pull you away,

All I want is one more moment,

But that moment's gone...

We love and cherish as much as we can,

And try to love more than we ever could,

But we both know it's too late,

We know we can never be the same...

I want to say one last thing...

 

All I want to do is stay here,

Wrapped in you forever,

But I know the time grows near,

The time that you will go away forever

When I whisper those five words,

Will you still hear me say,

I love you my dear

The clock counts down the moments we had left,

You finally pull away from me,

My yells and cries can't keep you alive,

As you finally disappear

I love you my dear

Reviews

[thoughts of jade]

All I want to do is stay here,
Wrapped in you forever,
But I know the time grows near,
The time that you will go away forever
When I whisper those five words,
Will you still hear me say,
I love you my dear

I know how that feels, the pain, the loneliness and the sadness...

great write, you gave justice to the emotion and the poem... thanks for sharing :)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

aww sad yet sweet... i like this, really nice, loved many lines in this, nice ending... nice title, really great