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I Can Only Wish

I Can Only Wish

A Poem by jex

I wish I could undo every mistake,
Go back through time and catch every opportunity,
And be a better person

I know my state of mind isn't the way it should be,
I know I am stuck in this emotional cell,
And I have thrown away the key

If the time comes that I can find a way to forgive myself,
If the time comes that I find a way to redeem myself,
Then maybe I can take that chance

For now, I can only wish

© 2012 jex


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This poem needs more reviews. :) I love this. The emotion in this fills every line, word, stanza. This is amazing and touching. I love this line:
"I know I am stuck in this emotional cell,"
As well as this part:
"If the time comes that I can find a way to forgive myself,
If the time comes that I find a way to redeem myself,"
You have a ton of feeling in this and wishes, but if you are yourself then you should be good to go. There is going to be ton of emotion in wanting have done things a different way and go back in time, but just have to make the best of it and learn and improve from the past and mistakes. Nice write, really enjoyed this one a lot.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Awesome, creative, very unique, and well composed.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A shame with 17 views there are not 17 reviews.
This piece deserves apprication it is wonderful, a well written piece of past regrets that haunt our very souls. How deeply you descripe your own personal hell.
I love this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem needs more reviews. :) I love this. The emotion in this fills every line, word, stanza. This is amazing and touching. I love this line:
"I know I am stuck in this emotional cell,"
As well as this part:
"If the time comes that I can find a way to forgive myself,
If the time comes that I find a way to redeem myself,"
You have a ton of feeling in this and wishes, but if you are yourself then you should be good to go. There is going to be ton of emotion in wanting have done things a different way and go back in time, but just have to make the best of it and learn and improve from the past and mistakes. Nice write, really enjoyed this one a lot.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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