the cure

the cure

A Poem by jeff hackworth
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this poem is in honor of my dad. whom died of lung and brain cancer from agant orange in nam. and for any won else who can't find the cure

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I know everyday I try to smight it I just can't fight it somedays I dream of a cure ,but one thing is for sure. I will not see the day

© 2010 jeff hackworth


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I truly understand the need to channel your emotions through poetry. I've done that myself when my grandmother died. Somehow, a poem for a dead immortalizes that person in a way. I like the unpredictable style of this poem, very much like emotions are simply being thrown into words without any thought. Nice Poem.

Keep Writing. ^___^

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



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I truly understand the need to channel your emotions through poetry. I've done that myself when my grandmother died. Somehow, a poem for a dead immortalizes that person in a way. I like the unpredictable style of this poem, very much like emotions are simply being thrown into words without any thought. Nice Poem.

Keep Writing. ^___^

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i'm very sorry for the loss of your father.. an emotional piece

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sorry for the loss, quite emotion you have penned

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this dude... Great.. =) keep going! 100/100

Posted 9 Years Ago


I 'm sorry for the lost of your father to agent orange. I knew many Soldiers who die from it. I was in the Army for 15 years. Poem is strong. Told of hope for a cure. Best cure in not to use agent orange. Add some period to separate statements. A very good poem. You need to remember your father.
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Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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jeff hackworth

belvidere, NJ



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Im am fourteen years old, and my name is jeff. Ive been reading big books sence a young age. And my dream is to become a columist for a newspaper. more..

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