Today was a Fairytale

Today was a Fairytale

A Poem by jhed
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it just came and I don't know why..ahahaha..Maybe still thinking of him.. :)

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Today was a Fairytale

 

I woke up and stared at the ceiling

 

I see your face and experience this feeling.

 

I don’t know how it all happened

 

I just realized it always makes me smile.

 

I went to school and saw you

 

I didn’t notice the things in my hand fell.

 

You saw what happened

 

And you help me pick it up.

 

I went to my class with a smile on my face

 

And everyone seemed surprised.

 

I was different from the old me

 

And I don’t know why.

 

Then, you came inside

 

And sat beside me.

 

My face turned red as you touch my arm

 

And then you talked to me like we’ve known each other.

 

The time passed by and yet, I was thinking of you

 

I went home laughing to myself.

 

Mama saw me and smiled wide

 

Surprise on her face, she asked me,

 

‘How was your day?’ she asked.

 

Then I answered with a smile,

 

‘Well, Today was a Fairytale.’

 

She smiled as I went to my room

 

Still laughing at myself.

 

© 2010 jhed


Author's Note

jhed
Ignore the rhythm and please tell me what to change. Thanks! :)

jhed:)
"ALWAYS SMILE:)"

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cute. typical love story

Posted 12 Years Ago


don't change anything. It was good. Very good. It made me smile and feel hope.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Sweet poem- fun to read. "Today was a Fairytale"---> from Taylor Swift... the title fits well.

Posted 14 Years Ago


cute. ;)

Posted 14 Years Ago


i love this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


thanks for all!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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awww.. swweeett !! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is an odd poem, no real rhythm, you rhymed then stopped?

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is such a wonderful and most beautiful write.
I really enjoyed this write. Very well written.


Posted 14 Years Ago


That was so sweet! Keep that tone... It works for you!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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jhed
jhed

manila, Philippines



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i'm a 16 year old girl from the Philippines who was influenced by my classmates to write stories and poems. I'm a "not so popular" in my new school but got great and loving and trustworthy friends to .. more..

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