Can I have you back?

Can I have you back?

A Book by jhed
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Result of boredom..I was listening to the song 'Jesus take the wheel' by Carrie Underwood when I wrote this one..

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© 2010 jhed


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jhed
what do you think??
Reviews would be very appreciated.. :)

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absolutely lovely poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is amazing. its sad, but its one of the best poems i've read in awhile.

Posted 14 Years Ago


tear. :) it was very sad. i LOVED reading this. lots of powerful meaning.

Posted 14 Years Ago


this was so sad. :( I could imagine what was going on though. It must have been horrible 4 u to experience something like that. Especially on ur Bday.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Awww... how sad... Jhed, is this true? Nice poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow- this is amazing. a close friend died on impact in a car accident two days ago... this poem really hit close to home.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is so b'ful. Cud feel the pain radiating from every word. Wish nothing like this happens to anyone....

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice emotional plot. Spelling: breaks=brakes. The flow was a bit choppy and akward. I think this would be better off as a short story.

Posted 14 Years Ago


A great powerful love poem. It was really good and I commend you on this work:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is sooo sad. the only thing i think messed me up while reading was "I cried and tap you on the shoulder" change tap to tapped. other than that well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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jhed

manila, Philippines



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