DESCRIPTION OF LOVE

love has its own meaning to people

                DESCRIPTION OF LoVe
 
                        Now what is love?
                     It is that fountain and that well
                     Where pleasure and repentance dwell.
                    Perhaps it is that sacring bell
                    That tolls all into heaven not hell
                    and this is love,as I hear tell.

                    Yes what is love?
                    It is a good deed done on holy-day;
                    It is December matched with May,
                    When lustful blood flows in fresh array,
                    Hark back months after  their play,
                    And this is love,as I hear say.
 
                    Yes what is love?
                    It is sunshine mixed with rain
                    It is a tooth ache gone again
                    It is a game where no man gain
                    The lass said no but there was pain
                     And this is love,as i heard plain
                 
                    It is a yea,not a nay
                   A pretty kind of sporting fray,
                   It is a bad thing  soon gone away;
                  Then no one will took advantage while your away.

                  It is a thing that creeps into your life,and will not go,
                  A prize that passed to and fro,
                  Something for one,and all too,
                 And that proves we will find it so,
                And this is love,sweet friend,I know

Author's Note

what is LOVE for you?

Reviews

[mhaie]

Yes! LOVE, LOVE and LOVE.. hehe
I like it. Nice one.

[bryandc15]

LOVE ..... LOVE ..... LOVE ..... it makes the world go round:)

[chuna]

love is you,,,

you know I like all your poems,it gives an impact to me and to my life...
yes what is love???
capital LOVE
Life's
Only
Valuable
Emotions!

love yah dude

[Jess]

haha!love yah too dude:)thanks for being a part of my life

[CecilA]

khicks,

Help me understand this wonderful poem.This is my interpretation.

"Description of Love"

Now what is love?
It is that fountain and that well
Where pleasure and repentance dwell.
Perhaps it is that sacring bell
That tolls all into heaven; not hell
and this is love, as I heard tell.

What is love?
It is a good deed done on holy day;
It is December matched with May,
When lustful blood flows in fresh array,
Hark back months after their play,
And this is love, as I heard say.

What is love?
It is sunshine mixed in rain,
It is a tooth ache gone again,
It is a game where no one gains,
The lass said no, but there was no pain.
And this is love, as I've heard plain.

What is love?
It is a yea; not a nay,
A friendly kind of sporting fray,
It is a bad thing soon gone away,
No one takes advantage while you're away.
And this is love, as I heard say.

What is love?
It is a thing that creeps into your life and will not go,
It is a prize that is passed to and fro,
Something for one and all too,
And that proves we will find it so,
And this is love, sweet friend, I know.

Is this close to your original? If so, I believe you have a great poem here. Perhaps you need to touch up my interpretation.

It's a unique and refreshing restatement of an eternal theme.

Thank you for sharing it with us.

[Jess]

Dear Cecil,
Thank you very much for your review,Ahm yeah,it is close to the original one:)Sorry if I couldn't be able to write it clearly, I'm having a hard time writing it,so I wrote what I'm really trying to mean.
I really appreciate your review:)

[CecilA]

You have done well. I was just trying to help with the English. Keep up the good work.

[Frieda P]

You! yeah, I 'love' your style! I really think this is 'love'ly!!

Love is someone passing you the last piece of chocolate.

[Jess]

glad you liked it Madam F:)

[kublakhan27]

Simply put, I love it :)

[Jess]

thanks much:)

[kublakhan27]

No problem :)

[Jess]

how's life anyway?

[kublakhan27]

Ah it could be worse I suppose :P How bout you?

[Jess]

wae?i mean why?ahm, I"m trying to be fine

[kublakhan27]

Well, I'm in kind of a lull right now which is good in the sense that my, um, issues are not bugging me...what prevents you from being fine?