dark road

dark road

A Poem by Jillian Alexis

This road is dark and winding,

As the last light fades from the summer sky

being chased by shadows, we are left to our own devices

To stay in the right lane is safe,

but i find we are tempted by the left,

heightening our chances of fate

I cant help but think that if this were to be the end,

atleast I am here with you,

for now we continue onward


© 2010 Jillian Alexis

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Nice write, you've well demonstrated the life in a suite of Road. Here in the life, there's too many lights and too many nights. Up and Downs're the key functions in the life in everyone's life. How to move on whether it's a light or a dark nights with some faith you've nicely structured thorough the piece. Words're realistic and appurtenant to everybody sitting over there and reading the life and walking alone on the path of journey. That's all i got from here, An incredible imaginary by you.

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Added on July 21, 2010
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Jillian Alexis
Jillian Alexis


"All the suffering of this world arises from a wrong attitude. The world is neither good or bad. It is only the relation to our ego that makes it seem the one or the other." more..