Deep Within the Forest

Deep Within the Forest

A Poem by Jillian Alexis

Butterflies long to be freed,

their vibrant colors taunting thee

as she lay upon a sea of wild flowers

grown from the richest of hues,

she is permeated with scents of love and loss,

her skin slowly dipped in a fiery sun's caress

 

Her Full crimson lips move in tune,

to this beautiful sweet surrender

as she drives her slender fingers into the dirt,

to feel this earth's constant hurt

 

"i shall die with you" she whispers

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2010 Jillian Alexis


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i meant to review this the first time i read it way back but for whatever reason i forgot.. but this is amazing. beautiful words to paint the vivid picture. and a haunting feel. i generally try to steer clear of a*s kissing but you did an awesome job. great work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


The bond between people and the environment is strong and undeniable-- indeed.

Posted 13 Years Ago


What a beautifully tragic expression.. speaking of freedom and colors so alive.. yet the loss.. the overwhelming loss that drives her to seek death... Richly painted in the darkest hues..

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on August 2, 2010
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"All the suffering of this world arises from a wrong attitude. The world is neither good or bad. It is only the relation to our ego that makes it seem the one or the other." more..

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