The Confessional

The Confessional

A Poem by jinjahman

The church pew perspiring with palms
not far from bursting hearts 
spreading their red mercury cream outward.

The dark lacey curtain split a sliver so deep in hope,
it was just enough to avoid my voice's mouth
cracking and hobbling through misdemeanours adjudged minor

Oh, all those sins acknowledged by the priest
who while uttering my penance ~ from some new darkness ~
showed himself professionally deficit with breathy ineloquence

The 18:50 queue, a smoke for all afterwards;

'Himself' gave us a loan of some pipes! 
Imagine if the wilier brothers knew -
there'd be war; 
Nothing a curtain could deflect
Nothing I couldn't retell, 
Nothing I would blunder through
in a well of tears damned for years

© 2011 jinjahman


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This is well written, but being raised Southern Baptist it makes little sense to me :).

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 2, 2011
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jinjahman
jinjahman

Ireland



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I've written songs and poems since basic maturity emerged from youth. I'm driven by reminiscence and reflection, youthful endeavours and changing realities of life. I try to explore the lexicon of th.. more..

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