Am I a Fool?

Am I a Fool?

A Poem by Grace
"

"

Am I a fool

?

Why didn’t see

?

That I was in love

Was it buried too deep

?

 

 

 

We had a great time

.

You opened your heart

Was I that blind

?

Why didn't I not see

?

 

 

Now you’re gone

.

I screwed it all up

.

If I could only have you back

I need a second chance

.

.

.

© 2011 Grace


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powerful write here, i can feel the emotions.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Stripped of emotion and raw with intellect, somewhat frightening to bear, well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Last line of second stanza is supposed to say "Why did I not see"

Posted 12 Years Ago



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