A Little Love and Devotion

A Little Love and Devotion

A Poem by Audrey Bruckner

For a friend in need....


dizzy catastrophe

spinning next to me

loosely curling rings in her hair


tunnel vision all around

following dreams to the ground,

but she only finds hurt there


I watch her swing

losing more than everything

and laughing all the while


she grins at me

I examine her closely

a large crack in her smile


walking on eggshells

in her own hell

she can't stop the motion


but if she falls

know she did it all

for just a little love and devotion


© 2011 Audrey Bruckner

Author's Note

Audrey Bruckner
rhyming sucks....

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Added on December 2, 2008
Last Updated on March 10, 2011


Audrey Bruckner
Audrey Bruckner

Tacoma, WA

I have been writing poetry since i was about 11. I am still working on it though. I don't really know poetry format or anything i just write what i feel. If I am not writing poetry I am playing soccer.. more..