I rather be inside barbwire

I rather be inside barbwire

A Poem by Ashley
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About a guy loving his fiancée who changed. He wanted to marry her. Enjoy!

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I wish I was getting permanent scars by being tightly coiled in barbwire than having the feeling of you leaving me
we live together, yet I hardly see you
you are always up and about with other guys
I love you sugar, why can’t you love me too?

I even go down on you and eat you out
why are you always messing about?
I’m tired of feeling obsessed and depressed crying over you
I cant even walk out of the house without checking my cell 1,000 times if you are okay
Why can’t you call me to say you are drinking with the girls?

Instead Sally has to call me saying you’re puking everywhere
Is that the only time I get to sleep in the same bed with you? When I have to take care of you?
You’re my fiancée yet you’re treating me worse than a spider on the wall
Talking does no help
I rather you fight and scream at me, then ignore my breaking soul
Why, why did you fall out of love with me when I did no harm?
Why, why do you have to be so cruel?
You give me more pain then pleasure, more anger then happiness, and more depression then hope

I paid for your wedding ring, and I was going to pay for your wedding dress
Covered in pearls and lace like you always wanted!
Will anything I do make you love me, like how you love yourself?

© 2013 Ashley


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Love the poem. I can relate to parts of it. My ex fiance was a jerk. Always getting mad over how I wouldn't talk to him when he knew something was wrong. Always hanging out with other woman when I wasn't about then one day it just ended. Pissed me off when he did it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Love it. This poem reminds me of "Love the way u lie"

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love is not love if it is forced.
Very descriptive, allows the pain of unwanted loss to come through.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting poem you managed to write here, the feeling of lost love is the hardest anyone can manage, it never goes away...anyway well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the poem. I can relate to parts of it. My ex fiance was a jerk. Always getting mad over how I wouldn't talk to him when he knew something was wrong. Always hanging out with other woman when I wasn't about then one day it just ended. Pissed me off when he did it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow... I'd be completely heartbroken if my love did this to me...
Very sad, and very deep. I feel pain in this. Great:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, that guy needs a reality check. I wonder how columnist Dear Abby would respond to this. Love is a two way street, or at least a one way street with passing lanes. A lot of emotional turmoil here...good job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That was hard to read. It's very dark and full of pain and rejection.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

scars, thanks!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Well done, did you mean scars or scares?

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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