Fallen, Locked, Heart

FALLEN for those melting words

They never hurt though they're swords

But those are only inside my thoughts

'Cause that is what I've always sought.

Your love LOCKED my soul in cage

Emptiness had been my only carriage

I've waited for you to set me free

Open the door that's locked with me 

Still waiting for you to come and return

I want now my HEART back, when it wasn't stern

You thief! It's all yours now...  keep it

A FALLEN LOCKED HEART to you I bid.

Author's Note

please ignore my grammar ^^,
thank you...

Reviews

[PurpleQuartz]

I enjoyed this, I think it was quite deep with a nice flow. Great write!

[Rhianne Ney]

Grammar is sometimes unnecessary to poems, yet these never lack the emotions that you are trying to let the audience see (no worries, I understand it)
Anyway, good going here ^-^