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the one where i hide my feelings behind a mundane observation...

the one where i hide my feelings behind a mundane observation...

A Poem by Jeff Loquist
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you know that sock hole...
the one your big toe pokes through...
always on your mind

© 2011 Jeff Loquist


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ahh cleverly impressed~

Posted 10 Years Ago


is anything truly mundane? especially from the porthole of observation .

Einstein didn't wear socks for that reason ..

Posted 10 Years Ago


thank goodness for mundane observations.

Posted 10 Years Ago


big toe poking through
everything needs some freedom
ah, breathe that fresh air

Hope you don't mind that I answered your senryu with one of my own. Just couldn't help myself.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I hate that sock, it always finds me on the most inconvenient days, I've been known to lose socks like that mid-work shift, my patience isn't very good some days

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on April 27, 2011
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Jeff Loquist
Jeff Loquist

Baton Rouge, LA



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