Those Without You Days

A look at back at love

 

 

 

 

Those Without You Days

 

Today is one of those without days,

The days where the sun may shine on the outside,

But on the indside it dies,

And the Good times remain in Memory,

All the time set to welcome you in.

 

 

But what Memories they are,

The brush of your hair against my face

The Brush of your skin against mine

That smile that would melt the coldest heart

Those deep blue eyes I could spend a lifetime exploring

I could search for an eternity and I would still be searching for more

 

 

And now the time beckons when our worlds become one

When a phone call makes all the difference

And I hear your angleic voice again

But soon that phonecall will end

And Today will become another without you day

 

copyright 2003 John Brunton

 

Author's Note

when reviewing this poem please keep in mind it was one of the first ones I ever wrote please be nice

Reviews

[John B]

thanks I hope what it says is good lol

[mick weller]

hi John
indside - inside?
That smile that would melt the coldest heart (maybe lose one that with 'a' or 'and a' ?)
angleic - angelic?
phonecall - phone call?
this piece says such a lot - great piece
cheers m8

It was nice and sweet. For one of your first it was very nice,
No I am not just being nice because it was one of your firsts. It was a good write.
Thankyou for alowing the world to read it.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

This poem has a lovely sentiment, I find it quite beautiful. Thank you for sharing. Debileah