Tired of Being broken

Tired of Being broken

A Poem by Daydreamer54

This is for all of those who have depression or ever had it. I hope this poem helps you, if not that, then the song I enclosed with it! If u don't like it, read my blog post about the poem!


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It's midnight and I'm in a pit of despair.

I'm wondering does anyone love me; do they even care?

I've been cut and bruised by people and life.

Should I end it all by the sharpness of this knife?

If i do such a thing, it'll all be in vain.

There would be no comfort just eternal suffering and pain.

I drop the blade and make my choice.

If I yell for help, someone must hear my voice.

I'm tired of being broken, tired of being bound.

This depression has really slowed me down.

I want to feel loved and happy again.

So please help me, my pieces need to mend.


Then I remember someone does care.

In his word he said he will always be there.

He said come all who are burdened and I'll give you rest.

He doesn't want us in this state, in us he sees the best.

I call for you Jesus, fix me and make me whole.

Send your angels to heal me and touch my soul.

Your words comfort me, I know you'll never lie.

 In the morning joy comes, and my spirits are high.

© 2010 Daydreamer54

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This was a good write. Even though I don't participate in religion myself, I think you showed what some people have forgotten: God is supposed to love everyone, no matter who they are or what problems they may have, even if they don't believe in Him. It's a beautiful poem, and I encourage you to keep up the good work (:

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Posted 10 Years Ago

Beautiful poem

Posted 11 Years Ago

Amazing, truly beautiful. I loved it, really made me feel better today. :) Jesus does love us. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

this totally explains what all people go through sometime in their lives. i love your honesty and the positivity that you have shown:) a great job:)

Posted 11 Years Ago

beautiful and inspiring piece, thank you for sharing this!

Posted 11 Years Ago

Im not a Christian but do follow a religion. This was absolutely amazing. Well written and it flowed so well . It was so empowering and touching. There always is someone there. someone who cares, be it a God a Goddess or just a person in your life. there is someone who cares. Al light in your life that maybe you dont see, but you are never alone and you should never give up.two thumbs up :) 10/10 i loved it

Posted 11 Years Ago

This was good and I even have feelings of being broken. So this was nice to read and that you show a way out by relying on God to be there for you.

Posted 11 Years Ago

A amazing poem. At the beginning I thought the poem was another person that could not find peace. You ended the poem with hope and a positive feel. Faith in God. Belief in something allowed us to stay strong and go forward. Thank you for the outstanding poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago

I LOVE this poem! I am a Jesus Freak and I completely agree with every word that you have said...beautifully written and it flows so well :) The rhyming doesn't seem like its forced like many rhymes do....great job! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

wow. that is a powerful poem. i wish i could have made the choose to drop the knife but didnt. now reading your poem i will alway remeber and i will drop the knife next time

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Last Updated on September 29, 2010



Memphis , TN

Hey welcome to my profile! Feel free to check out my writing and leave a review and I'll be sure to return the favor! Anyway, I found my love for writing when I was in the 1st grade. I write poems and.. more..

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