Welcome To My Life.

Welcome To My Life.

A Poem by johnny
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 Welcome to my life,

It’s more fascinating than a new invention.

 

In my life all you see is,

Dark and twisted things for miles.

 

As for me I’m like a tree stump,

Never to be moved,

Never to see new things.

 

My personality is like comedian,

Always trying to make a laugh.

 

My main purpose in life is to succeed,

In anything and everything,

It is as hard as getting into Yale.

 

When I exceed the need,

I feel like I could jump for joy.

 

I want to share my life with someone who understands me then accepts me,

Not someone that accepts me for something else.

 

Three words really?

Can three words really describe my life?

Can it describe yours?

Three words,

One word,

Depressive.

© 2009 johnny


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johnny
watcha think?

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I hope not depressive Johnny. I like the piece....it evokes a feeling of uncertainty in life. It describes you?

The "when I exceed the need" line seems out of place. I'm not sure why.....it seems trite I think. Otherwise it's an easy read and showcases your obvious talent. I thank you for sharing it.

Post more.... please.

markymark

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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i know how you feel, as though no one knows who the real you is...
and i'm guessing she did? but now she's gone, and you feel lost.
i love your writing

-Faith♥

Posted 11 Years Ago


I think it's a bit scary. It's as like an invitation to hell. But I think what makes it scary is because you didn't really put any reason why you're so-called life is depressing. It makes me wonder what kind of life it must be that you're referring. It must have been my imagination, but really, I imagine you as a vampire, trying to lure beautiful girls with your dark aura that would make them think that evil is the same as bravery or strength. Sorry, I think I;m blabbering here.

By the way, I like your comparison with a tree. I think it's very clever. And I like the fact that you showed some emotion at the very end, as though you're saying that your life is not a fairytale, it's not something filled with happiness and triumph, but still, you're willing to let someone enter it, only if she can accept those things as facts.

Anyway, still, a very good piece to read.

Keep Writing. ^___^

Posted 11 Years Ago


I hope not depressive Johnny. I like the piece....it evokes a feeling of uncertainty in life. It describes you?

The "when I exceed the need" line seems out of place. I'm not sure why.....it seems trite I think. Otherwise it's an easy read and showcases your obvious talent. I thank you for sharing it.

Post more.... please.

markymark

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely=)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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