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Heart in a blender

Heart in a blender

A Poem by johnny
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poem i wrote when my girlfriend of 13 months died in a car crash. Indescribabl

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 Think.....tick.....tock,

The hand of the clock struck two am,

Lying in my bed just thinking,

Thinking of the soild heart break,

Of when you left me all alone.

 

It's simple irony to think about you,

Your hair abis and your eyes do but wonder stray,

You were simply perfect,

Indescribably prefect.

 

You are my baby girl,

I need you for my life,

To live out my days in your arms,

And you in mine.

 

I try to think that your in a better place,

Which i know you are,

But my heart sunk and deep in my bowels,

My heart twisted and bent,

 

I hope you get this,

In the cloud,

To see how much,

I love you!

© 2009 johnny


Author's Note

johnny
this was 1 of the hardest i have ever written.

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First of all, condolence for your lost. I understand why it's one of the hardest poem you've written. I've seen a few misspelled words here, but I don't think they mattered anyway. I won't say this is the best poem I've ever read, or the most emotional one, but I'll say that writing this one, is definitely a very good way of showing how much you love her. This is a very sad poem, both the message and the story behind its creation. I think you've clearly explained how you feel, and by doing so, I say I like this poem. Thanks for sharing this here. I know that to share something this private is not a 'nothing'. Anyway, good luck.

Keep Writing. ^___^

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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that was very deep, i can only imagine why it was so difficult for you to write.
i am sorry.
amazing job with the emotions, i could feel your pain.

-Faith♥

Posted 11 Years Ago


First of all, condolence for your lost. I understand why it's one of the hardest poem you've written. I've seen a few misspelled words here, but I don't think they mattered anyway. I won't say this is the best poem I've ever read, or the most emotional one, but I'll say that writing this one, is definitely a very good way of showing how much you love her. This is a very sad poem, both the message and the story behind its creation. I think you've clearly explained how you feel, and by doing so, I say I like this poem. Thanks for sharing this here. I know that to share something this private is not a 'nothing'. Anyway, good luck.

Keep Writing. ^___^

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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johnny

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