Hello Mom

Hello, I'm a new writer desiring to learn fast from you. Please let me know, what emotion does this short 100 word piece evoke from you? Also, comments are welcome.

Hello mom,

It's the 1st of August and my time...
...my time is almost up.
I'm scared.

The light’s closing in on me, the people know enough already, more than I planned.

They see now, sadly; and lies no longer work.

See how I turned out, a bloodsucking pedophile, but my money saved as many lives. Will they understand?


The voices too are coming.
The dealmakers.
They need more blood than I can supply, I failed.

They're coming mom, I feel them closing in. They'll crush me and I don't want to live to see it.


Your soon-to-die son,
Bill


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