Dreams

:3

Take me away from stupid reality

Into a wonderful, colorful, painless fantasy

Filled with happiness, calmness, joy and pride

Filled with love and peace, and no one has cried

Taking you into a magical wonderland

Your imagination singing like a cheerful band

Twirling around, dancing on oceans

In the air, tasting the love potions

With us, you can be as random as can be

For it's your own world, where you can be free

Where angel wings can lift you to the sky

Where you are immortal, where you cannot die

Battling dragons', saving princesses

No conflict between brother's and sisses :D

Sailing on oceans, finding buried treasure

Taking it in, measure by measure

Every night, when you drift of  to sleep

Just think of your fantasy, and away you'll leap

You can't control what goes on it your head

But you just have to enjoy it, so go to bed(:

Author's Note

haha sorry for this random poem. i was just in a cheery mood(:

Reviews

[MaddyHi]

Wow! I am pretty impressed! Really! This is a really good poem!

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amen indeed "Every night, when you drift of to sleep
Just think of your fantasy, and away you'll leap"

Great poetry :)

:)

[Karli]

gorgeous imagery and expression. good work!:)

[Mauricio Montoya]

This piece makes think of alice in wonderland only you're never late for that important date. nice work.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem soothes the soul. I found it to be a beautiful experience.
The imagery and the message was great.

[Ang]

Brought a smile to my face! I love the descriptions to all of the different types of dreams a person can have. I also loved the ending, "You can't control what goes on in your head/But you just have to enjoy it, so go to bed(:" Great poem! :)

[luciddreamer]

really nice :)

[alan peter kelly]

the last line was funny...."yes ma...i go to bed now!!" ha ha...a sweet,dreamy poem...

[Carolina Kel]

I would love to see a sequel to this detailing the downside of dreams, the darker ones we all have. It would be a wonderful companion.

[Joseph - Michael]

Never apologize for your works, always be proud what you write...

Anyway, this is pretty nice and simple piece you've written; Advicing the others to imagine their favorite illusions before falling asleep, so they can dream the impossibles...

Overall, nicely done tho...