Dreams

Dreams

A Poem by Jordyn Lee
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Take me away from stupid reality
Into a wonderful, colorful, painless fantasy
Filled with happiness, calmness, joy and pride
Filled with love and peace, and no one has cried
Taking you into a magical wonderland
Your imagination singing like a cheerful band
Twirling around, dancing on oceans
In the air, tasting the love potions
With us, you can be as random as can be
For it's your own world, where you can be free
Where angel wings can lift you to the sky
Where you are immortal, where you cannot die
Battling dragons', saving princesses
No conflict between brother's and sisses :D
Sailing on oceans, finding buried treasure
Taking it in, measure by measure
Every night, when you drift of  to sleep
Just think of your fantasy, and away you'll leap
You can't control what goes on it your head
But you just have to enjoy it, so go to bed(:

© 2010 Jordyn Lee


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Jordyn Lee
haha sorry for this random poem. i was just in a cheery mood(:

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Wow! I am pretty impressed! Really! This is a really good poem!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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amen indeed "Every night, when you drift of to sleep
Just think of your fantasy, and away you'll leap"

Great poetry :)

:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


gorgeous imagery and expression. good work!:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


This piece makes think of alice in wonderland only you're never late for that important date. nice work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This poem soothes the soul. I found it to be a beautiful experience.
The imagery and the message was great.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Brought a smile to my face! I love the descriptions to all of the different types of dreams a person can have. I also loved the ending, "You can't control what goes on in your head/But you just have to enjoy it, so go to bed(:" Great poem! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


really nice :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


the last line was funny...."yes ma...i go to bed now!!" ha ha...a sweet,dreamy poem...

Posted 10 Years Ago


I would love to see a sequel to this detailing the downside of dreams, the darker ones we all have. It would be a wonderful companion.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Never apologize for your works, always be proud what you write...

Anyway, this is pretty nice and simple piece you've written; Advicing the others to imagine their favorite illusions before falling asleep, so they can dream the impossibles...

Overall, nicely done tho...



Posted 11 Years Ago



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Tags: dreams, happiness, no pain, cute, :)

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