Dreams

Dreams

A Poem by Jordyn Lee
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Take me away from stupid reality
Into a wonderful, colorful, painless fantasy
Filled with happiness, calmness, joy and pride
Filled with love and peace, and no one has cried
Taking you into a magical wonderland
Your imagination singing like a cheerful band
Twirling around, dancing on oceans
In the air, tasting the love potions
With us, you can be as random as can be
For it's your own world, where you can be free
Where angel wings can lift you to the sky
Where you are immortal, where you cannot die
Battling dragons', saving princesses
No conflict between brother's and sisses :D
Sailing on oceans, finding buried treasure
Taking it in, measure by measure
Every night, when you drift of  to sleep
Just think of your fantasy, and away you'll leap
You can't control what goes on it your head
But you just have to enjoy it, so go to bed(:

© 2010 Jordyn Lee


Author's Note

Jordyn Lee
haha sorry for this random poem. i was just in a cheery mood(:

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cheery is right great job

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very cute. Makes me happy, and wishing I could sleep right now, haha. Anyways, adorable write, and I like the two line format. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


felt happy and joyful. good job. dreams, even if it is only the positive side. i thought it was well writte. good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Great rhyming...and love the descriptions-its calming :)
In the second to last stanza you spelled off with only one f :)
thnx for sharing...

Posted 11 Years Ago


I think this is very well written
I like this. I thought it was beuatiful really.


Posted 11 Years Ago


great poem about dreams and fantasy and how drifting to sleep opens the mind
to new places, perhaps where wishes come true, if just temporary
great job, keep it up

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like this. And the creative thoughts you put into it too.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Tags: dreams, happiness, no pain, cute, :)

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