This Poem is A Lot More Than You Think

This Poem is A Lot More Than You Think

A Poem by Jordyn Lee
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(: not all my poems r depressing -.-

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I love your sweet smile, i love your emerald eyes
I love your care-free personality that no one can despise 
I love your warm auburn hair that glistens in the sun
I love the way you talk, laugh, smile, walk and run
I love the way you make me smile, just by saying 'hi"
I love the way I get teary-eyed when we say 'goodbye'
I love how the slightest things you say can make me laugh so hard
I love how when your around, i can act like a total retard
I love how smart you are; so witty and quite clever
I love how I could write about you on and on forever
I love it, how hard i fell, and am still falling, too
I love how i can end the poem with 3 words: "I LOVE YOU" <3

© 2010 Jordyn Lee


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aww, now ain't that the dangest cutest thing i ever did read.

wees alls luve you tooo sweety pie snif sniff

Posted 10 Years Ago


this is adorable

Posted 10 Years Ago


Great Job!
It seems the character inside the poem is a sweet couple!!!!!
Love it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


i like it alot but technically 3 words n two symbols:)
jk
but yea it was wonderful
i like n luv it
luv it
luv ya
-sugar dumpling muffin baby pumpkin pie:)


Posted 10 Years Ago


good job

Posted 10 Years Ago


Get ton blud! Grt, ane it?! Is like, no messin. Jus spill it like u is true and dat. Blud, if I's gets a gurl oo is like dat, I b like, boom ane it? I's single now, but is like, shutup ane it?! I's like not bein like dat! But yea, ane it blud?

Posted 10 Years Ago


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You are a really talented writer! Hi, my names Aynsley; and I am thirteen years old. I'm new to Writerscafe, but I've already published four chapters to my novel Born To Die; I hope you like it, please check it out. Here's a Rating of 70 for your effort. Add me as a friend :)


Posted 10 Years Ago


-.- I was tired wen writing it. gimmie a break D:

Posted 10 Years Ago


*cough* Oh man. "I love how I could write about you on and on until forever"? I expect more writing about your love for him :D

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on June 5, 2010
Last Updated on November 28, 2010
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