Strange Memory? Or Just A Dream?

Strange Memory? Or Just A Dream?

A Poem by Jordyn Lee
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Memories

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Memory? Memory. What is this memory?

Of laughing, of lollipops, of cotton coated floors

Remembering this memory, this strange strange memory

Do I hear giggling? Do i see sugar sweet doors?

Cherries, green bubbles, what does it mean?

Little dolls playing, eating, like a dolly tea party

Remembering white water, a creek? A stream?

This memory? This Memory. Smiles whole heartily

Dashing around, traveling up, but suddenly racing down

Nostalgia? This feeling. Im dead, but it feels so alive

Carefree fills the air, we don't belong in this town

She laughs, i copy; it's a party for five

Music fills my  ears, rainbows fill my eyes

Sniffle. Tear. Water sprinkles like a stream

Going by too fast, it's time to say our goodbyes

Was that a memory? Or just a crazy dream?

© 2010 Jordyn Lee


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I love inquisitive poems as this one.. not everything is clear... you show that with efficiently.. good job,..

Posted 10 Years Ago


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I like the poem. Funny how the memory can appear in dreams. Faces, laughter and things missed can appear in our mind at any time. Dreams and memories fall together with age. Time will twist all things to better or worst. A very good ending to your poem. You made me think this evening. Goal of a good writer. A excellent poem.
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Posted 10 Years Ago


nice one

Posted 10 Years Ago


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man, dig this, races through emotions, colourful metaphor and imagery.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This piece is so colorful in the sense that when I read that what I picture an Alice in wonderland dream. I think you’ve done a great job in putting this together. Excellent write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


memory. good poem reminds me of memories.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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