Morning comes

Morning comes

A Poem by Jolie Blossom
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Just a little something I wrote while seeing this pretty flower at work :-)

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Soft morning flowers 
Stretch out their tear veiled petals
Kissed by light rains dew

© 2012 Jolie Blossom


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It's really hard to write a very short peom because it really must have power and meaning, but you really captured it here...nicely done

Posted 12 Years Ago


Delicate words carefully rendered

Posted 12 Years Ago


Quite nice. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


What a lovely poem and a wonderful way to start the work day! Obviously this beautiful rose had nothing to cry about.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I reallly liek the line about the tear veilied petals--that one part alone is exceptionally good. Not many things in the world are as beautiful as a flower.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this haiku.
You are very perceptive.
What a great poem.


Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful photo and very good description. A wise person appreciate the beauty of nature. Thank you for the photos and the words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


I am very much fond of haiku poems. Yours is good haiku. Haiku telling nature's gift. My best wishes. Your writings are good.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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A haiku! That is really a Haiku! and such a beautiful one too, oh! nice assist Creepy!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Jolie Blossom

12 Years Ago

Why thank you! :) it's only the second I wrote...so I'm really no expert. But I love how powerful ju.. read more
I very much like this ... but am wanting to change one word. Are they really tear STAINED if the tears are still there resting gingerly on the petals. A stain is evidence of what was there. How would tear SPECKED ... or tear DOTTED ... or even tear COVERED. Just an old guy's thoughts.


Posted 12 Years Ago


Creepy Swine Guy

12 Years Ago

Yes .. I like that TOO ... VERY much.
Jolie Blossom

12 Years Ago

Yay! Thanks for your input :):)
Creepy Swine Guy

12 Years Ago

My pleasure.

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Added on September 2, 2012
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Tags: Flowers, morning, haiku, rain, pretty

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Jolie Blossom
Jolie Blossom

Latham, NY



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Heyyy Shakespeares!! I'm Jolie, 24, and a free spirit. Welcome to my little corner on the cafe. :D I mostly write poetry, but I've dabbled at stories and I do write my own lyrics for guitar. And.. more..

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