Morning comes

Morning comes

A Poem by Jolie Blossom
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Just a little something I wrote while seeing this pretty flower at work :-)

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Soft morning flowers 
Stretch out their tear veiled petals
Kissed by light rains dew

© 2012 Jolie Blossom


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It's really hard to write a very short peom because it really must have power and meaning, but you really captured it here...nicely done

Posted 7 Years Ago


Delicate words carefully rendered

Posted 7 Years Ago


Quite nice. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


What a lovely poem and a wonderful way to start the work day! Obviously this beautiful rose had nothing to cry about.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I reallly liek the line about the tear veilied petals--that one part alone is exceptionally good. Not many things in the world are as beautiful as a flower.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love this haiku.
You are very perceptive.
What a great poem.


Posted 7 Years Ago


Beautiful photo and very good description. A wise person appreciate the beauty of nature. Thank you for the photos and the words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


I am very much fond of haiku poems. Yours is good haiku. Haiku telling nature's gift. My best wishes. Your writings are good.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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A haiku! That is really a Haiku! and such a beautiful one too, oh! nice assist Creepy!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jolie Blossom

7 Years Ago

Why thank you! :) it's only the second I wrote...so I'm really no expert. But I love how powerful ju.. read more
I very much like this ... but am wanting to change one word. Are they really tear STAINED if the tears are still there resting gingerly on the petals. A stain is evidence of what was there. How would tear SPECKED ... or tear DOTTED ... or even tear COVERED. Just an old guy's thoughts.


Posted 7 Years Ago


Creepy Swine Guy

7 Years Ago

Yes .. I like that TOO ... VERY much.
Jolie Blossom

7 Years Ago

Yay! Thanks for your input :):)
Creepy Swine Guy

7 Years Ago

My pleasure.

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Added on September 2, 2012
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Jolie Blossom
Jolie Blossom

Latham, NY



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Heyyy Shakespeares!! I'm Jolie, 24, and a free spirit. Welcome to my little corner on the cafe. :D I mostly write poetry, but I've dabbled at stories and I do write my own lyrics for guitar. And.. more..

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