Fragile

I wrote this about coming to the realization that people you trust completely can surprise you and let you down.

How could a love so captivating
And a relationship built upon trust
Vanish with a touch of ugliness
Merely become a fleck of dust


A black rose enclosed by a twenty foot gate
Found foolish ways to conceal all the signs
My dreams brought the truth to life
When I was brave enough to close my eyes


My world is only a whirlwind of confusion
That I'm falling into deeper, every day
Fragile and betrayed, I still crave you
And I can't move on if you have nothing to say

Reviews

[EDDAIDJ Badr Eddine]

Hi Jolie ...... I really liked your words , despite it is full of metaphors, but in the same time it is realistic , and i hope you will find your happiness very soon.