A Poem by Jolie Blossom

I wrote this about coming to the realization that people you trust completely can surprise you and let you down.

How could a love so captivating
And a relationship built upon trust
Vanish with a touch of ugliness
Merely become a fleck of dust

A black rose enclosed by a twenty foot gate
Found foolish ways to conceal all the signs
My dreams brought the truth to life
When I was brave enough to close my eyes

My world is only a whirlwind of confusion
That I'm falling into deeper, every day
Fragile and betrayed, I still crave you
And I can't move on if you have nothing to say

© 2014 Jolie Blossom

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Hi Jolie ...... I really liked your words , despite it is full of metaphors, but in the same time it is realistic , and i hope you will find your happiness very soon.

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Added on May 6, 2014
Last Updated on May 6, 2014
Tags: Fragile, rose, sad, breakup


Jolie Blossom
Jolie Blossom

Latham, NY

Heyyy Shakespeares!! I'm Jolie, 24, and a free spirit. Welcome to my little corner on the cafe. :D I mostly write poetry, but I've dabbled at stories and I do write my own lyrics for guitar. And.. more..