Cliché

Cliché

A Poem by That_Guy
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Full of Cliché yet still so true

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Roses are red and violets blue, 
Full of Clichés I'm writing to you.
There may be plenty of other fish in the sea,
But I'd rather you stay and be with me.

All is fair in love and war,
Well I choose to fight so you see what's in store.
If love is blind why is it so easy for me to see,
That we belong together, just you and me.

I'm unlucky in cards but lucky in love,
Because I have you, sent from Heaven above.
They say opposites attract and if that's true,
How could I be worthy of you.

You're picture perfect, the stuff dreams are made of,
While I have a face only a mother could love.
But every dog has it's day,
And us together is anything but Cliché.

© 2012 That_Guy


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Such a lovely rhythm, the beat moves you through it so nicely, along with the regular rhyme. I love the innocence of it, and the self-deprecation is something that I think everyone can relate to 'a face only a mother can love'
Very lovely poem

Posted 8 Years Ago


Total cuteness:p!!

-JiDonnelly'

Posted 8 Years Ago


JiDonnelly

8 Years Ago

Making what your nickname?

That_Guy

8 Years Ago

Total Cuteness haha
JiDonnelly

8 Years Ago

proud!!

-Ji'
Adorable. Made me smile. :-)

Posted 8 Years Ago


That_Guy

8 Years Ago

Mission accomplished! thank you haha
Very cute, it made me feel all mushy inside. I don't know much about love poems, outside of a few 18th century poets, but this was nice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


That_Guy

8 Years Ago

Mission accomplished haha thank you
CLUTZ

8 Years Ago

you're welcome
"Roses are red and violets blue,
Full of Clichés I'm writing to you."
Made me smile thinking of how many poems I've wrote with that beginning :)
But you're very talented, it all flows so well, written very smoothly.
I love finding legit, talented writers:)

P.S. Found you through: That_Girl..y'all prove that there's still hope for good literature ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


ForeverNever

8 Years Ago

I sweet, I'm also very honest ^.^
That_Guy

8 Years Ago

I admire honesty, Makes the reviews mean that much more ;)
That_Girl

8 Years Ago

lmfao double meaning much?
light and cute:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


That_Guy

8 Years Ago

thank you :)
melissa

8 Years Ago

welcome
Aw. That's cute. :) It reminds me of fluffy clouds for some reason.

Posted 8 Years Ago


That_Guy

8 Years Ago

haha I hope that's a good thing
That_Guy

8 Years Ago

haha I hope that's a good thing
Fabulous! Light, loving, sweet romanced in perfect verses!

Posted 8 Years Ago


That_Guy

8 Years Ago

thank you, I had fun with this one
Priscilla Sayers

8 Years Ago

:)
This is deeper than a cliche. It's a great write! Although it starts with the beginning of a cheesy, and usually cliche poem, it turns into something deeper than that. I like it a lot!

Posted 8 Years Ago


That_Guy

8 Years Ago

I'm so glad you think so.
Thanks Allyson ;)
I'm unlucky in cards...I like it. I'll make a toast. Here's to cliches lol

Posted 8 Years Ago


That_Guy

8 Years Ago

haha cheers ;)

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Tags: cliche, love, poem, roses, red, fish, war, blind, together, faith, beauty, attract, picture, perfect, dog, day, anything

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That_Guy
That_Guy

Anza, CA



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First off I'm 23 years old. I'm a lover and a fighter. I've competed in various martial arts and I consider myself a rather opposing figure. On the outside you see tattoos, muscles and scars but what .. more..

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