What Time is Good for You

As it passes us by lets take advantage of it

They say it heals all wounds and flies when you’re having fun,

Then why does it seem to drag on every time I go for a run.

I’m being told it’s running out,

So what’s this killing it all about?

Time is of the essence and cannot quit,

Now get up and  lets make the most of it.

A night out on the town,

Or just a day in the sun,

Don’t rush your choice nor pick just one.

Time only matters when I’m with you,

And never hurts more than I’m used to.

It need not be every waking moment,

But in my life you’re the main component.

Let this be the beginning and not the end,

For that wound time cannot mend.

And if it would help I’d make it stand still,

 So I’m sure Father Time would make do,

Now tell me, what time is good for you?

Reviews

[green dreams]

A passion for love rejoiced the beautiful piece. Beautiful.

[That_Guy]

Thank you very much

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Wow. This is extremely amazing, beautifully written, and has a feeling too it that makes you want to keep reading until the page ends. Great work

[That_Guy]

well if it isn't the girl next door heh.

I'm so happy you think so. I really want my feelings to get across when I write. Thank you

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Why yes it is :}
Not a problem, it was my pleasure.

[That_Guy]

well I'm That Guy so if you need anything let me know

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thanks

[Baby Ricochet]

Time stands still during an orgasms, traffic jams and fire fights. All in very different ways. Great poem bro.

[That_Guy]

Very true, very true indeed.Thanks Man

[Priscilla Sayers]

Anytime!lol! Great piece. Honestly a wonderfully thought provoking poem that reveals more questions regarding TIME.....

[That_Guy]

haha sounds good. thank you

[Priscilla Sayers]

Very welcome;)

[Lily Mae]

Well a half hour???

[That_Guy]

I really need to check my profile more often, I'm sorry I'm late

[Yarelis Vidal]

LOVE IT. =) this is too cute. I love how it ends. I enjoy poems where the Title is the finishing line. I do it often.

[That_Guy]

It's like a build up, I wait the whole poem for closure or an answer. Thank you though ;)

[Yarelis Vidal]

your welcome :)

[kublakhan27]

Words to live by^^

[That_Guy]

Thanks Mate

[kublakhan27]

No problem^^

[mariah]

This is awesome! Full of creativity and very well described. I love the meaning behind it to, I compleatly agree. This is a great poem, you wrote it perfectly :P
-Mariah

[That_Guy]

Thank you very much Mariah, I'm glad you liked it

[mariah]

your welcome :P

[Heather]

I love how creative this poem is, I loved "time only matters when I'm with you" but also loved "let this be the beginning and not the end". I hate when time runs out and love when it begins. Very well done!

[That_Guy]

Thanks I feel the same way.

[Admiral Kirk]

Wow, this is really good. It seems really deep and thoughtful, like it came right from your heart. There are some really ingenious lines in here, and the ending is very clever... It leaves itself open, with options... A question is a good way to end. I feel like your last line really sums up your whole idea. "Don't rush your choice nor pick just one" is expressed throughout the poem, especially the end.

Time only matters when I’m with you,
And never hurts more than I’m used to.
It need not be every waking moment,
But in my life you’re the main component.

This was a great stanza, I really liked that one. You make some really great points in here, accompanied by phenomenal rhymes... "that wound time cannot mend" is definitely worth thinking about... A noteworthy poem, my friend. Keep it up!

[That_Guy]

Thanks Mate, I truly appreciate the review. I really enjoyed my word choice in this piece as well.

[Admiral Kirk]

You're quite welcome. Yeah, it was pretty good. :)