Our Future

Our Future

A Poem by Jon Settle
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Just another attempt of love....

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Our Future

There you are,

I can see you clearly

Just standing there,

Unsure where to go next.

 

I see what you don’t,

The future we both desire

Only you don’t want

To accept that future.

 

Your heart speaks clearly to me,

As do your eyes.

Listen won’t you

It’s not all that far away.

 

Look deep within and

 I promise you’ll

See our future together

Forever and always happy.

© 2012 Jon Settle


Author's Note

Jon Settle
Just a random thing I wrote... Most definitely not my best like I said just a random write...

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Hmm.... It's nice.. a good write indeed!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Such a cute poem :) I love when people are to blind to notice that a great life awaits them but they just stop and lack faith in the situation. Good work :3

Posted 8 Years Ago


Awwh, I actually think this really great and you done an excellent job with it. I can relate with it too. I have this guy friend that I really like and I don't know if he sees his future as being with me any. But that's exactly how I see it. I close my eyes all of the time and when I imagine my future I always plan he's in it too. If your random writes are always good as this, then keep them coming dude! :)

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jon Settle

8 Years Ago

Thanks Ashley
Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

8 Years Ago

You're welcome. (:
i enjoyed reading this poem but i loved the ending .....great write

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jon Settle

8 Years Ago

Thanks Afra
Love is hard to find and very hard to control. The poem told a story of love that isn't settle yet. Hard to be on the same path and with the same desire. Sometime one person need to catch up or one people must have patience and wait. I like the directness in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jon Settle

8 Years Ago

Yes it is and thanks for the positive feedback
Very nice. I love the simple writes, and there is still a message or story involved. Sometimes the simplest thoughts are best, and your words flow well here. Nice write, friend. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jon Settle

8 Years Ago

Thank you

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Added on September 14, 2012
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Jon Settle
Jon Settle

Orrville, OH



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