Looking Back

Looking bad from a very bad relationship. Noticing it was time to get out, and become something and to never return.

Looking Back

Roses are red

Violets are blue

Once upon a time I loved you

looking back at the old times

It made me notice you weren't worth a dime

To be so cruel and very mean

Never again will you get to see me

I am leaving never to return

But I guess that really was never your concern.

Reviews

[Sirius King]

this is great!

...been there before... :-))

[Joseph Aldridge]

Thanks for your review. :))

[Sirius King]

np :-)

[s y e]

Woweee! This is great. Loved it!

[Joseph Aldridge]

Thanks so much! :)

[s y e]

Welcome! :-)

[darkest]

Wow. Nice poem. loved the rhymes.

[Joseph Aldridge]

Thank you so much!

[Matt Abecia]

wow! how sad poem it is. but this is good! like!

[Joseph Aldridge]

Thanks so much!

[Soul Fire]

I really like this.excellent work! Glad you got out!

[Joseph Aldridge]

Thanks so much!

[Soul Fire]

Youre welcome