Living With Death

Living With Death

A Poem by Joseph D. Smith
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I once died, but was somehow still alive...

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Pure darkness and death
came without the deepest breath.
I found myself awake.
Although it wasn't a wake,
Darkness had surrounded me,
I was just pure consciousness,
But my thoughts, they would flee,
Leaving only awareness.
This energy I could not begin to harness...

© 2011 Joseph D. Smith


Author's Note

Joseph D. Smith
I tried to explain something that is unexplainable, such as being dead, but at the same time being awake, without any thoughts or bodily functions. Forgive me if I couldn't paint a good picture, that's all I'm saying.

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good job!! i thought it was good

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Joseph D. Smith
Joseph D. Smith

Juleokin, KY



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I am Joseph D. Smith, I am commonly known as Julius the Jules, which is my stage name as a professional, Experimental Pop musician. Fans of Julius the Jules are known as Juleokin. I earn my income fro.. more..

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