Aspie-Killer...

Aspie-Killer...

A Poem by Joseph D. Smith
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An aspie sometimes resents things that are hidden from them...

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Broken aspie made ill,
Around the world everyone knows.
Dusty belittled specks.

© 2011 Joseph D. Smith


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Joseph D. Smith
This, as I now know, is an attempt at senryu.

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Poetry is not my forte but I like it work!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 10 Years Ago


as i understand it this is more senryu
haiku deal more with nature as subject matter while senryu relate to the human

however that distinction alone does not lessen the meaning of this piece
it has great relevance to a condition we are only now just learning to understand
nice job joseph

check this link:

http://startag.tripod.com/HkSenDiff.html

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on June 23, 2011
Last Updated on June 24, 2011
Tags: aspie, Asperger's Syndrome, childhood, neglect, senryu
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Joseph D. Smith
Joseph D. Smith

Juleokin, KY



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I am Joseph D. Smith, I am commonly known as Julius the Jules, which is my stage name as a professional, Experimental Pop musician. Fans of Julius the Jules are known as Juleokin. I earn my income fro.. more..

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