Hazel

Hazel

A Poem by Joshua Cornil

Hazel eyes piercing my heart
Your soul entwining mine
Kiss blowing my mind
Voice grasping my attention
Warm embrace has me in a trance 
In my life as swift as wind
Drunk with no drink
High with no drug
You see through me
Every second like Christmas
Heart escaping my chest
Too beautiful for words 
Had my heart from the start
You've got me
One day you might see
The greatest treasure in my eyes
When your sad the earth cries
You will never be alone
Always there when you need a hand
Not a movie scene
You are my queen
All i ask is your trust
Never let you down 
Giving you my heart
Something profound
I stand behind you
Fall back 
You're in my arms
You're in my heart

© 2011 Joshua Cornil


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"fall back

you're in my arms

You're in my heart"

my favorite lines; trust and protecting/ caring? Nice Josh :) you romantic you. the only thing I would say for you to do is use punctuations but it's your choice. OH and describe more what happened with this girl, because it sounded good and so sweet but too general.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Perfect poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"fall back

you're in my arms

You're in my heart"

my favorite lines; trust and protecting/ caring? Nice Josh :) you romantic you. the only thing I would say for you to do is use punctuations but it's your choice. OH and describe more what happened with this girl, because it sounded good and so sweet but too general.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Joshua Cornil
Joshua Cornil

Delano, CA



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