Luna

Luna

A Poem by joshua deathdealer
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10/2011

"
                                                      
                                                  Luna the little white cat...
                                             she terrorizes my house
                                                            s***s like crazy
                                                pisses on the curtains
                                                    runs up and down
                                               the hallways at night
                                                    puts her cold wet
                                                 nose on me while
                                                  I'm trying to sleep

                                                                      -.-

                                                I will not be mean...
                                                  I will love my cat
                                                    because sometimes 
                                                        I do love her
 

© 2011 joshua deathdealer


Author's Note

joshua deathdealer
True story...cats are good for anger management..xx

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Sweet poem, the last verse is just enigmatic enough to be intriguing, and could be an interesting metaphor for a certain approach to life... where we accept that people, or indeed, animals, or Gods, or life, may not always do the things we want, they may not behave as we think they should, we may not understand them, but if we know we can love them at their best, then we should also try to love them at their worst, even if they're not quite fitting in with our plans or ideals. Nice sentiment xx

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cracking up. I have a 16 year old resident feline who makes me CRAZY.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I know, right?

Posted 9 Years Ago


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dorkus maximus ;)

atleast you're not behaving like Lenny in Of Mice and Men....yet xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Aw :) I have a cat and she drives me just about as crazy but I love her to death haha so I can definitely relate to this. Thanks for posting!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I like cats too. Sometimes they seem to not care about anything, and then they jump up in your lap, snuggle about awhile, then fall fast to sleep. Great companions.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Its seems like you were mad I'm sorry but yeah i like cats to (:



Posted 9 Years Ago


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This part is cute:
" puts her cold wet
nose on me while
I'm trying to sleep"

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I have 2 cats at home lol I love them to death! This was a sweet poem(:

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Very good, I too have a cat that really ticks me off, as she refuses to poo in her litter box after 9 years

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Hahha I love this! =) Poem with full of life!! Cat's life! XD I've two cats myself and I love them. :)

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joshua deathdealer
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