Luna

10/2011

                                                      

                                                  Luna the little white cat...

                                             she terrorizes my house

                                                            s***s like crazy

                                                pisses on the curtains

                                                    runs up and down

                                               the hallways at night

                                                    puts her cold wet

                                                 nose on me while

                                                  I'm trying to sleep

                                                                      -.-

                                                I will not be mean...

                                                  I will love my cat

                                                    because sometimes 

                                                        I do love her

 

Author's Note

True story...cats are good for anger management..xx

Reviews

[Zoe Jay]

Sweet poem, the last verse is just enigmatic enough to be intriguing, and could be an interesting metaphor for a certain approach to life... where we accept that people, or indeed, animals, or Gods, or life, may not always do the things we want, they may not behave as we think they should, we may not understand them, but if we know we can love them at their best, then we should also try to love them at their worst, even if they're not quite fitting in with our plans or ideals. Nice sentiment xx

[...]

amazing write, love the feelings in this.
Enjoyed this. I had a cat once, it ran away,
I miss that cat so much. I used to sit and talk to it
like it was a person. Weird i know, anyways love this write.

[EMF]

Me? I'm a dog guy. But I loved this. It made me smile and laugh out loud. And give a soppy sigh at the end. Dog's do the same. Good isn't it? The poem itself is great too. Great flow and structure. The only downside was that I had to copy and paste into word and change the colour. But that's down to my eye's not your set up. Great poem.

[Aidz]

damm catz.... nuff said on that I think lol

[turning violet]

so sorry for the redundant chatter,
but its funny
my cat is luna
all black
w white feet,
patches on her face..... lol..

[turning violet]

Hey thats my cat's name....
except,
my Luna is your's polar opposite!
all black with a little white!

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Aww...yeah, you did tell me you owned a cat called Luna. She seems to be quite playful. Anyway, I love this poem mostly for its sense of humor and the fact you give the cat a bigger picture of what it is. But all pets need love and this is one of them. Good job.

[Chris Taylor]

A quirky, funny little poem this is. I really liked the simplistic way you crafted this one.

[Jessi Leigh]

Can't help but to love them. They have strange ways of teaching us. Nicely written :)

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good..!!