I Often Think

I Often Think

A Poem by Canicus

I often think
Myself a writer
Thoughts and feelings in ink
Make my heart a little lighter

I often think
Myself a musician
My mouth and soul in sync
Make me a little less broken

I often think
Myself a warrior
Face to face with danger, not to blink
Make everyone's life a little softer

I often think
A little too much
Putting my heart in a kink
Making me less sensitive to touch

Maybe if I am to follow my heart
I can expose my complexion
So from now my life can start
And of myself I can be certain

© 2014 Canicus


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Canicus
enjoy, and feel free to add on in the comments :p

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tk
I often think too much as well. I could not agree more with this. Our brains make us rational, but our hearts make us human. You could have added other persona too, just to make a smoother transition to your last stanza. It could make your point stronger. Nevertheless, still a worthwhile read. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Canicus

9 Years Ago

well like I said in the note, feel free to add on
Amazing. its really strong and full of emotion.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Oh my freaking goodness! I love this poem so much. The flow of the words, the font and the title, and most importantly the message behind this beautiful piece of art. You have done such a lovely job. I love the significance of each talent or whatever you want to call that in each stanza. I believe my favorite stanza would have to be the first one since I do, in fact, love to write. Another stanza you could have added (this is just a suggestion) is an artist. They contribute a lot with their drawings and artwork. That is a suggestion if you have considered extending this poem. I haven't read your poetry in awhile and I must say that I have missed it.

Wonderful like always! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Canicus

9 Years Ago

It's nice to have fans, and if you want I encourage you to add on to this with a comment. I like whe.. read more
Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

9 Years Ago

I do not know exactly what I would add. Maybe we can message back and forth to brainstorm some ideas.. read more

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