Wishing For a Miracle

Wishing For a Miracle

A Poem by Canicus

Lately, I've envisioned us holding hands
Getting to know each other a little better
Slowly, you're making my thoughts bestir
Taking me to my most majestic dream lands
My mind caught and sinking in quicksand
Without you lands are cold and danker
To me you will forever be special
I hope we could at least have on chance
You really know how to make me smile bright
Holding my curiosity back due to fright
Please, one last try at romance
For you seem to have me in a trance
A chance for the sparks to ignite
I'm wishing for a miracle

© 2014 Canicus


Author's Note

Canicus
I hope you enjoy it, I've been playing around with different forms of poetry. Some feedback would be nice. Thank you

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Awe, this is so sweet and sincere! I really like the rhyme scheme you used, it flowed really well. Great poem

Posted 5 Years Ago


*one not "on", figured I'd let ya know haha

Posted 5 Years Ago


I'm wishing for a huge miracle, too.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Awwww, this is so romantic and sweet. I love poetry like this. You truly did an awesome job. You should continue this form of poetry. You are an amazing poet anyways. We all have had one moment or two in our lives where we wish for a miracle with someone that meant something to us. Those are the moments I will always cherish. In those times, my heart feels so much joy and hope. I have enjoyed this. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Really like it, an entire lot

Posted 6 Years Ago



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