invisible

invisible

A Chapter by Canicus
"

a song I wrote I hope everyone likes it

"

I feel so unnoticed

when you walk right past me

no matter what I do

 it's me that you never see

 

why is it always me

 that goes unseen

 

It's like I'm the moon

always being covered up

 * It's just my luck

 

(chorus)

 It seems to me

 that I'm invisible

 in those beautiful eyes

* Invisible

 

 hiding in the dark

waiting for you

 but you always seem to

look right through me

 

 I can't be seen

 by you

 

 why is it

that I'm not seen

 by your eyes

 

 (chorus)

 It seems to me

that I'm invisible

 in those beautiful eyes

 * Invisible

 

 I never seem to

 catch your eye

 I doubt I will

until the day I die

 

 why do you

 not notice me

 

it's like I'm

not even there

 * it's not fair

 

(chorus)

 It seems to me

that I'm invisible

 in those beautiful eyes

 * Invisible

 

 Is there a reason

 why you can't see me

please explain to me

what's going on

 

it's impossible

 to make myself seen

 

you stare

right through me

 * like I'm not there

 (chorus)

It seems to me

that I'm invisible

 in those beautiful eyes

 * Invisible

 

** Invisible

(fades out)



© 2011 Canicus


Author's Note

Canicus
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* is screamed
** is a long scream

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good job...
XD

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love it, great job

Posted 9 Years Ago


It sings well. Good lyrics. Nice job!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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