Invincible

Invincible

A Chapter by Canicus
"

I wrote this for my girlfriends birthday

"
you are my everything
every thought in my mind
every breath I breathe
why were you so hard to find
 
you're all I will ever need
all I'll ever want
with you my happyness
is guaranteed
 
I want to spen my life with you
baby, there's nothing I'd rather do
 
(chorus)
next to you
I feel invincible
there's nothing I can't do
anything's possible
 
you're on my mind all the time
I can't go a day without thinking about you
no matter what happens to me
my heart you subdue
 
you are the other piece
to my heart
you shine like a star
you are the brightest part
 
everything about you is amazing
every time we speak my heart starts racing
 
(chorus)
next to you
I feel invincible
there's nothing I can't do
anythings possible
 
I won't ever let you go
keep you by my side
I'll stay with you
until that very last tear is cried
 
I'll love you until
the end of forever
keep you close
you are my treasure
 
you are everything to me
forever in your heart is where I want to be
 
(chorus)
next to you
I feel invincible
there's nothing I can't do
anything's possible
 
you make me invincible...
 
 


© 2011 Canicus


Author's Note

Canicus
I don't think it's that good but what do you think?

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"I'll love you until the end of forever." Forever can be shorter than you think, can't it?

Posted 7 Years Ago


Coming from a songwriter like me, I really enjoyed this. However, a little tweeking here and there with wording and stuff, but I would love to hear this as a song someday :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I think this is really nice.There are some powerfull imotions hidden inside this simple words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I think it was lovely. it is very powerfull...
XD

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love it, its amazing!!!! Great job

Posted 9 Years Ago


You might not think it's good but it is. Very well written my friend. :) Keep writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow this is really good and well written. I liked the theme alot and it seemed filled with emotion. Good job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is beautiful. I know I'd absolutely love to receive a song like this from my boyfriend. Well done! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


wonderful.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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