Invincible

I wrote this for my girlfriends birthday

you are my everything every thought in my mind every breath I breathe why were you so hard to find   you're all I will ever need all I'll ever want with you my happyness is guaranteed   I want to spen my life with you baby, there's nothing I'd rather do   (chorus) next to you I feel invincible there's nothing I can't do anything's possible   you're on my mind all the time I can't go a day without thinking about you no matter what happens to me my heart you subdue   you are the other piece to my heart you shine like a star you are the brightest part   everything about you is amazing every time we speak my heart starts racing   (chorus) next to you I feel invincible there's nothing I can't do anythings possible   I won't ever let you go keep you by my side I'll stay with you until that very last tear is cried   I'll love you until the end of forever keep you close you are my treasure   you are everything to me forever in your heart is where I want to be   (chorus) next to you I feel invincible there's nothing I can't do anything's possible   you make me invincible...

Author's Note

I don't think it's that good but what do you think?

Reviews

[Pastel Nix]

"I'll love you until the end of forever." Forever can be shorter than you think, can't it?

[Daenerys]

Coming from a songwriter like me, I really enjoyed this. However, a little tweeking here and there with wording and stuff, but I would love to hear this as a song someday :)

[UnderCompulsion]

I think this is really nice.There are some powerfull imotions hidden inside this simple words.

[Sarah]

I think it was lovely. it is very powerfull...
XD

[HeIsWe]

I love it, its amazing!!!! Great job

[Day Dreamer]

You might not think it's good but it is. Very well written my friend. :) Keep writing!

[ClosedEyesOpen]

Wow this is really good and well written. I liked the theme alot and it seemed filled with emotion. Good job.

[TheRavenQueer]

This is beautiful. I know I'd absolutely love to receive a song like this from my boyfriend. Well done! :)

[nostal]

wonderful.